Sally is writing a diary entry. Help her write the diary entry in about 45 words. You may use the words given to help you.

Sally’s Fun Day at the Book Fair*
Saturday, 18th August | Sunny

Sally visited the Book Fair with her mom. There were many colorful booths! She tried to find an adventure story about pirates but couldn’t. Suddenly, she saw Cookie books at a booth. They looked like real cookies! Sally picked up a shiny one about a cookie adventure. She bought it with her pocket money. Sally felt so excited to read her new book. She skipped home, smiling all the way. What a wonderful day!  

(80 words)


文章特點:

  1. 以小三程度作出發點,語句簡潔為主。
  2. 在結局處加入自的的創意想法,提及看到一本Cookie Book。
  3. 加入細節,如bought it with her pocket money,提及買書的錢從何而來。
  4. 寫出一天的總結,What a wonderful day! 說出Sally這天的感受。

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