Dylan got a present last month. Look at the pictures and write a story in about 90 words. Used the words given to help you.

Dylan’s Camera Surprise

Last month, Dylan got a digital camera from his mum for birthday. He was over the moon and couldn’t wait to take photos with it.

Last week, on a sunny Sunday morning, he spotted a bright yellow flower in the garden. “I’ll capture this!” he whispered. But when he pressed the button, the screen went black. Dylan’s excitement turned to panic. He shook the camera, checked the batteries, but nothing worked.

“Why won’t you work?” he cried, feeling frustrated. Tears rolled down his cheeks. Just then, his mum noticed the malfunction and gently fixed it by resetting the camera. Feeling relieved, Dylan snapped a perfect photo of the flower. Now he knows even tricky gadgets need patience!

(117 words)

文章特點：

1. 時間線清晰以及有描寫故事背景時間 -> Last month -> last week (Sunday morning)
2. 使用常見idiom -> Over the moon (取代Happy) *非常實用
3. 高級用字⏬
   • capture 拍攝 (取代take a photo of) v.
   • frustration 沮喪 (取代sad/unhappy) adj.
   • malfunction 發生故障 (取代damage) n.
   • gadget 裝置 n.
4. 主角有因此學習到面對問題時需要有耐心去處理
5. 故事中有加入對話以使內容更生動
6. 情感變化描寫 -> couldn’t wait -> excitement -> panic -> frustrated -> relieved