四格圖畫寫作 – Chloe’s Strange Dream (小五程度)

Chloe had a strange dream last night. Look at the pictures. Write about Chloe’s dream in about 45 words. You may use the words in the boxes to help you.

Chloe’s Strange Dream

Last night, Chloe had a bizarre dream. She turned into a glittering butterfly and skipped through an enchanted forest. The trees whispered secrets, and flowers hummed lullabies. Happily, she danced under rainbow skies. Suddenly, a mysterious shadow appeared—a giant spider with glowing eyes! Chloe screamed and woke up in a cold sweat (idiom!). Her heart raced like a drum. Relieved, she giggled, “What a wild dream!" She grabbed her teddy bear, still amazed by the adventure in her sleep.

(100 words)


文章特點:

我會把這一篇寫作或分為小五程度,因為字數大約100字,而且裏面有一些高級的單字及用了idioms(英文的成語),以下分享給你!

  1. Bizzare 奇怪的 adj. (取代strange)
  2. Skip 跳躍 v. (取代jump)
  3. Enchanted 魔幻的 adj.
  4. Mysterious 神秘的 adj. (取代strange)
  5. in a cold sweat 感到害怕 *idiom

文章中語句維持簡潔但不失鮮明的形容,及利用了擬人法去描寫森林中的花花草草,如whispered secrets及hummed lullabies。

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